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"cold. hard. reality." KisaIta by ~YonderBeyonder:iconYonderBeyonder:



Kisame crawled over to the young man, covered in blood and dirt.

“kisame...” came a husky and soft voice.

Kisame nodded and came closer, looking at the dying young man in front of him.

Uchiha Itachi.

Kisame wanted anything to get out of this dream. this nightmare.

he and Itachi had gone on a mission. a dangerous mission, that went out of hand. now, Kisame had lost a limb and Itachi was at deaths’ door.

“kisame...” breathed Itachi again, coughing up a mouthful of blood.

“l-lie still, Itachi-san...” Kisame said softly, trying to comfort his partner and stroking the Uchiha’s cheek. he would’ve never done this before... but there probably won’t be a later.

Kisame looked with his simple black eyes at Itachi’s. it was one of the first times he had ever seen the Uchiha’s eyes any other colour then red.

they were grey-black, with death clouding their vision.

“... i’m going to miss you, kisame...”

Kisame bit his lip and watched as one of Itachi’s blood-soaked hands raised itself and caressed his cheek, smearing blood lightly across his gill-markings.

“you’re not going to die, Itachi-san.” said Kisame quietly, a small comforting smile on his face, trying to reassure himself, more then his team mate.

“don’t be ridiculous... Kisame...” Itachi breathed, blood trickling down from his mouth.

Kisame gripped the hand Itachi had caressed his cheek with.

“you’re not going to die!” he repeated.

Itachi just lay there, looking at Kisame with blurred and hardly opened ebony eyes.

“you’re not going to die!” Kisame repeated.

“kisame...” breathed Itachi, his voice sounding very far away.

“i can’t even feel your hand in mine...”

Kisame felt his eyes sting with that cursed hot and salty liquid.

“you’re not going to die! YOU’RE NOT!” shouted Kisame, more to himself than Itachi.

Itachi looked at Kisame, a small smile on his lips.

“i’ll miss you...”

Kisame’s eyes widened as Itachi’s eyes closed for the last time. the stinging salty liquid in Kisame’s eyes making his vision blurred.

“no...” breathed Kisame, dropping Itachi’s cold hand.

“... no!”

“NOO!!!” Kisame screamed and gripped his dead partner’s body, screaming at the top of his lungs, the cursed salty liquid falling form his eyes.

Kisame’s lungs burnt as he screamed, trying to drag Itachi’s soul back to him. but it was too far away, even for Kisame to reach. even with his two arms and one leg.

Kisame sat there, sobbing. screaming. hoping that somehow, Itachi could come back.

Kisame slowly sat up and plunged a kunai into his wrist.

please let him wake up from this horrible nightmare! please!

Kisame watched the blood from his wrist flow like a waterfall onto the ground, mixing in the mud.

Kisame didn’t wake up. this wasn’t a dream.

the shark-man’s tear-filled eyes closed and opened again. his partner was still there. Kisame now registered that this wasn’t a dream. this wasn’t a nightmare.

this was cold. hard. reality.

“... i’ll miss you too, Itachi-san...”

with that, Kisame pulled the kunai from his wrist and plunged it into his chest.

“lets hope we can meet together in another world...”

“yes... let’s hope...”
©2005-2010 ~YonderBeyonder
:iconyonderbeyonder:

Author's Comments

just a shounen ai story gave me the idea for. so, this is dedicated to her. :D

... i made myself cry when i wrote this... :|

yes. pathetic. i know.

I NEED CHOCOLATE!!! :shakefist:

anyway, this is shounen ai. it could easily not be KisaIta. so, don't flame me, okay?!

i only wrot it today, so there might be a few problems. :dead:

no need for mature, me thinks... ^^;

Comments


:iconstarizzy:
it was very imagery-projecting..... TT^TT poor them!!!

I REALLY LIKE IT!!!!

nono there isn't a problem with it keep it this way!!!

so faved~~~ hehe~~

kisame: i am in another world??

*haku and zabuza walks past*

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「感じさせてくれ。。。」我愛羅 
"bring it on "- G-3
:iconlightlybattered:
Wow, it's so freaking sad!

Plus it's like they're only expressing themselves because death draws near...
How unfulfilled >_<

Argh! -_________- I can see why you cried...

Good writing! :D

--
'Five for a dollar
cooks in three minutes
Tastes great
Ode to ramen (2X)
Ode to ramen noodles'
- Ode To Ramen, Destroy
:icongyakuten:
Ah, a death fic u_u;;..i can imagine that..really bloody.


Kisame’s lungs burnt as he screamed, trying to drag Itachi’s soul back to him.

that was a good line ^^.

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- stop being such a whale's penis ;] -
HAH. Being excited makes me throw up ^^
me: hey do you know why gay guys are lucky?
sis: ...why? *looks at me weird*
me: because they can have sex at any age and not get pregnant. *laughing like a lunatic.*
:iconyonderbeyonder:
woooow... "imagery-projecting"? :omg:

i'm glad you like it!!! :D

Kisame: so... i am in another world?? where's Itachi-san??

Itachi: *being scolded by his father* . . .

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"Relative to it's size, the barnacle has the largest penis of any animal." - Gregory House.
:iconyonderbeyonder:
yeah... that's probably true. yeah.. "unfulfilled" is right. :sniff:

huh? did you cry? o.o eep! sorry! ^^;

thank you! :cuddle:

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"Relative to it's size, the barnacle has the largest penis of any animal." - Gregory House.
:iconyonderbeyonder:
i prefer to write blood and gore in detail, but i didn't this time. ^^;

you liked it? thanks! :cuddle:

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"Relative to it's size, the barnacle has the largest penis of any animal." - Gregory House.
:iconalbelsgirl:
Yes your right, that one REALLY made meh cry, woa visions all blurry O.O you MUST listen to this song it matches SO perfect with this story
Artist:Vanessa Carlton
Song:Rinse
Thanks so much foir writting this story it was your best yet^^ :clap: on my favorites for sure ts really really good^_____^

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" I'm still gonna call Deidara a woman. He wears more eyeliner than JLo. " -cyx-14
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:iconmewmew22:
Wow...Reki told me to watch and she started playing that song...That is really depressing...But a good story line, me likie ^__^
:iconkizu-chan:
That is too sad. TT^TT
:cries:

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Into an open mouth, a fly will enter!
:iconlightlybattered:
Hehe, it's cool -stoic mask crumbling-
-coughnothingcough-

:hug::D

--
'Five for a dollar
cooks in three minutes
Tastes great
Ode to ramen (2X)
Ode to ramen noodles'
- Ode To Ramen, Destroy

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